Originally posted by DeadPoet:
To be frank, after reading this several times I am still
not sure what this poem is about. It is really a very challenging
poem i.e. the details are known only to the writer.
But several questions and images do come into my mind when I am
reading it. Who is she? How is she related to the writer? Is this a
love story between a poor army guy and a rich girl? Or with a
hostess?
The writer is clearly in love the girl, but is this a one sided
love affair, as shown in animated when youre happy, dead when
youre down.' ?
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I sense rejection, hapless, and even anger in the poem. But I think
the writer is not going to give up without a fight as shown in
against the flow; the torrent im always fighting
And the last line forever .. rolling
, rolls to where? Rolling
in the mist of humans emotions? Rolling to death? Why roll, not
walk or run?
This is only my guess; maybe I am totally out of point. 
But it is still a good poem. 
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Well, it does have some of those elements in it, there is anger,
rage but these are tempered by the bittersweet tone of his words,
he feels regret, and anger , not at himself, but also towards her
rigid behavior.She knows she has a choice and she wants to take
that choice, but what if she doesn't have the guts to take that
step?Heh.Its a convulated poem...I usually write in a ramblinbg
fashion, the thoughts hat flow out from my mind, are simply typed
at once.
